Self Assessment
- the volume of the music is too loud at points
- one of the cuts is delayed and needs to be edited
- lighting when shown on a projector may be an issue
- we have yet to film the ending
- the narrative may not be clear at this point
Questions for Discussion with audience:
1. What is the narrative?
2. Can you notice the colour correction?
3. How does it fit the thriller genre?
4. How does the soundtrack create a mood or atmosphere?
5. What is the audience for this short film?
6. Where would you expect to see this short film?
7. Is the pace of editing suitable for the style of the film?
8. We switched the aspect ratio from 16:9 to 2.39:1 which is common with Thriller films. Do you like this style?
9. Is there enough dialogue?
10. Is the lighting an issue?
Audience Feedback
Medal: Good range of shots
Effective use of sound
Mission: Make narrative more clear, perhaps have more speech
more shots of the antagonist
Medal: Good use of camera angles such as over the shoulder and establishing/ wide angled shots.
Mission: Include some extreme close ups to show the protagonist's facial expressions.
Have a clearer narrative. Level 3
Medal: Suspense built well
Follows thriller conventions
Mission: Adjust brightness/contrast in premiere.
More/clearer dialogue
Move away from horror themes
Medal: Good camera shots
Good use of lighting effect
Mission: make narrative more clear
more dialogue
Medal: Really good camera work and good location used
Mission: I thought the music didn't relate to what was going on. I was also unsure of the
genre. Level 3
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